The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table gives information about the amount in metric tons of local catches and imported fresh fish in Perth, Australia, between the
years
2004 and 2014.
In a ten-year period
it is possible to see that more fish were caught than imported and the most productive year was in 2008 with 81.36.2 metric tons of local fished seafood.
Concerning Perth's fish purchase, it can be seen that the highest volume was acquired in 2012, Add a comma
period,
amounted
to 1227.3 metric tons of fishing products. Correct pronoun usage
which amounted
On the other hand
, 2005 had the lowest import rate of the years
, Fix the agreement mistake
year
amounted
to 231.6. The figures Wrong verb form
amounting
of
imported and local Change preposition
for
fishes
in 2007 achieved 6532.7, the biggest Fix the agreement mistake
fish
overall
in 10 years
.
Overall
, it is interesting to observe that this
activity presented a fluctuation through these 10 years
, although
it increased in numbers at the end
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