The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999
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This
line chart depicts the comparison between the US and
Japan
for unemployment rates over 6 years. It is clear from the graph that the percentage in
Japan
went up gradually to 4.6%. Unlike, the United States which dropped until it reached 4.1% in 1999.
According to
what is shown in the
Japan
line, the proportion of not working Japanese increased to be approximately constant from March (1997 to 1998).
Then
, it rose and became similar to the US per cent nearest 4.5% in half of 1998. After that, it reached its highest point at 4.6% in March 1999. As for the US line, the percentage of unemployment decreased by 0.5% each year, where it was as same as in
Japan
per cent in 1998.
Next,
they fell down to the lowest point about 4% in the third month of 1999.
To sum up
, we could say that both country's percentages were going in the opposite direction from March(1993 to 1999).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unemployment rate
  • Trend
  • Comparison
  • Period
  • Sharp increase/decrease
  • Correlation
  • Economic policies
  • Technological advancements
  • Global economic conditions
  • Consumer spending
  • Social welfare
  • Public sentiment
  • Predictions
  • Economic strategies
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