In many countries, online shopping is becoming more and more popular. Some people think that this is having a negative impact on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Public concern regarding an increase

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purchasing goods and services via online platforms is increasingly topical. Some individuals argue that

this

activity has drawbacks in social lives. In response to

this

aforementioned issue, I thoroughly disagree that shopping through online shops

generate

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negative effects

due to

posititive

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positive

developments in saving time and

money

.

Firstly

, utilizing online shops

while

buying needs and wants has a benefit because of less time-consuming. The reason is that individuals only

require

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required

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to download applications which offer a place to consumers and sellers doing

the

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trading activities. These activities only consist of a few

minute

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minutes

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for downloading and accomplishing

payment

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the payment

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process compared to buying in shopping centers requiring more than one hour for transporting and completing

transactions

. Taking Indonesia as one example, nowadays individuals do not need to go outside and face traffic jams

for heading

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to head

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to shopping centres since they only utilize apps, namely

shopee

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Shopee

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which guarantees

about

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apply

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only 5 minutes to purchase

stuffs

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stuff

kinds of stuff

pieces of stuff

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.

Secondly

, buyers and sellers can get extra

money

while

using and trading from

online-shop

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online shops

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. The reason is that the apps, offering a place for buyers and sellers

doing

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transactions

, provide extra discounts and cashbacks for their users.

Therefore

, not only they can receive their

stuffs

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stuff

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, but

also

they can get less expensive

price

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prices

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and some

money

after finishing their

transactions

.

For example

, people making

transactions

via online-shop can get

cashbacks

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cashback

at 25% and discounts

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of up

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up

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of up

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to 10% ,

thus

this

offering can save income

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of around

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around

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35% from the initial price.

To sum up

, buying goods and services

by

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from

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online-shops

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online shops

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have

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has

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several benefits,

for

instance

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it offers time efficiency and

saving

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saves

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money

.