The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the US and Japan between March 1993 and March 1999. Write at least 150 words.
This
line chart depicts the
percentage
of the
workforce
in two different countries: the US and
Japan
, from
March
1993 to
March
1999. It is clear from the graph that after
March
1998 the
workforce
ratio
reached nearly 4.5 in both US and
Japan
.
According to
what is shown, the US
workforce
percentage
decreased gradually from 7 to 5.5 between 1993 and 1995. Regarding the US graph, it generally shows a decreased
ratio
throughout the period. It started from 7 and reached 5.5 during the first two years. After that, the
percentage
sustained at the same rate of about 5.5 before started decreasing gradually again until reaching its minimum value of nearly 4 by
March
1999.
On the other hand
,
Japan
started from a modest value of about 2.3
ratio
with a remarkable increase during the first three years from 1993 to 1996. After 1996, it experienced a stagnation period at an average rate of about 3.3 before it started increasing substantially from 1998 to 1999 ending up at
4.5
Correct article usage
a 4.5
show examples
ratio
.
To sum up
, we could say that
while
the
workforce
percentage
was increasing in
Japan
during the decade, it was on the other side decreasing in the US, until they met the same
ratio
of about 4.5 by
March
1999.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, workforce, japan, march, ratio with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Unemployment rate
  • Trend
  • Comparison
  • Period
  • Sharp increase/decrease
  • Correlation
  • Economic policies
  • Technological advancements
  • Global economic conditions
  • Consumer spending
  • Social welfare
  • Public sentiment
  • Predictions
  • Economic strategies
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