The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart in 2005 shows the
number
of students who chose certain university subjects
. The number
are different in every subject between Fix the agreement mistake
numbers
males
and females
. In this
bar chart the highest number
of males
just
over 20 Add a missing verb
is just
thousand
in science
subjects
but the lowest number
of just under 5 thousand
in languages
Fix the agreement mistake
language
subjects
. On the other side, the highest number
of females
just
under 25 Add a missing verb
is just
thousand
in the Social Science
subjects
. Also
the lowest number
of just over 1 thousand
in Mathematics subjects
. The statistics of bar
chart Correct article usage
the bar
shows
Correct subject-verb agreement
show
males
did best
and achieved Rephrase
better
good
numbers in five Correct word choice
better
subjects
; Science
, Mathematics, Humanities, literature and law than females
in 2005. So, females
did best
than Replace the word
better
males
in three subjects
; Social Science
, languages and Arts.Submitted by hassanrasuli52 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, subjects, males, females, thousand, science with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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