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The chart shows the percentage of males and females teachers in six types of educational settings in The UK in 2010

The chart shows the percentage of males and females teachers in six types of educational settings in The UK in 2010
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The bar chart depicts the proportion of
men
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 and women educators in six education grades in The United Kingdom in 2010. At one glance, it can be illustrated that female teachers are participating in a high ratio of
Pre-school
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 and Primary school.
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men
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tuturs
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tutors
tuteurs
 numbers have a higher rate than women in University nearly seven out of ten university mentors are covered by males. An insignificant amount of
men
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 schoolmasters work in pre-schools. With the higher level of the educational system, the ratio of
men
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 who participated in the education system is going to rise. In Collage, the perception of female and male masters did not differ too much.
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, the gender gap is precisely noticeable in the UK's school settings. As the degree goes up, the quantity of instructors changes in various educational organizations.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words men with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gender distribution
  • educational settings
  • primary education
  • secondary education
  • further education
  • higher education
  • adult education
  • specialist education
  • dominance
  • balanced ratio
  • non-traditional roles
  • trends
  • percentage
  • male teachers
  • female teachers
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • statistical data
  • demographics
  • workforce composition
  • gender disparities
  • graph interpretation
  • educational workforce
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