The chart shows the percentage of males and females teachers in six types of educational settings in The UK in 2010
The bar graph below gives information about the number of teachers in six
type
of schools in 2010, grouped by Change to a plural noun
types
the
gender.
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apply
Overall
, it is shown that as the stage of school
become
higher the number of women teaching is lower.
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Firstly
, in the low grade school
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schools
such
as pre-
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preschool
school
, primary school
, and secondary school
, the teachers were dominated by female
. In the first two education, Fix the agreement mistake
females
furthermore
, female educator
extremely outnumbered Fix the agreement mistake
educators
its counterpart
, at almost ten times the male Fix the agreement mistake
their counterparts
teacher
. Fix the agreement mistake
teachers
While
for the secondary school
, eventhough
the difference between these two gender Correct your spelling
even though
group
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groups
did
not significant, Verb problem
was
female
still stood for more than half of the teacher composition. Fix the agreement mistake
females
This
pattern did not apply for
college, where gender equality has been achieved in terms of the number of Change preposition
to
teacher
.
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teachers
On the other hand
, more men were interested in become
a lecturer in the university or private training institute. For Change the verb form
becoming
the
these two institutions, Remove the article
apply
men
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men's
educator
accounted for almost 60% and just under 80%, respectively.Fix the agreement mistake
educators
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