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The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologist in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The diagrams illustrate what type of profession anthropology graduates chose after finishing their degree and the salaries they made based on the institution they picked. It is shown that jobs with full-time
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 dominate other choices provided,
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 the combination of part-time
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 and postgrad study gigs has the lowest interest.
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 to that, people having occupations in the government sector are relatively paid well compared to other types of employment. The pie chart implied that graduates are more attracted to full-time
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 jobs with an absorption of 52% of all respondents. Under the said type of jobs are either professions that are not known or unemployment with 15% and 12% respectively. There's a small portion of part-time
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, full-time postgrad study, and part-time
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 with the postgrad study that stood at the bottom of the figure at 5%.
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, it is clear from the table that the salaries of anthropology employees are much higher in the government sector with 50% of them gaining over $100,000 after 5 years of
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.
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, in private companies, the proportion of people earning several levels of paychecks is more balanced. Not particularly the same as the other two, the amount of money being given to the people who thrive as freelance consultants is relatively high, with 80% of them getting paid around $75,000 until over $100,000 after several years of working.
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