The chart below shows the result of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The bar chart compares the percentage of people who are divided into three categories based on the
coffee
and tea
buying habits in Sydney
, Melbourne
, Brisbane
, Adelaide, and Hobart
.
Overall
, it can be seen that going to a café for coffee
or tea
was the most popular type of drinking habits
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habit
,
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while
buying fresh coffee
was less popular.
In terms of visiting a café for coffee
or tea
, citizens in Hobart
and Melbourne
had the highest proportion which was relatively equal at around 63%. Sydney
had the
second place when it Correct article usage
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comes
to drinking Wrong verb form
came
coffee
and tea
in a café at about 60%, and after that
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that,
Brisbane
was in the
third status with almost 55%. In Adelaide, a little less than half of the residents went Correct article usage
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café
for Change preposition
to café
tea
or coffee
which was the least
proportion for Correct word choice
lowest
this
trend.
Regarding to
buying instant Remove the preposition
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coffee
, it was more preferable for individuals in Hobart
at about 54% and it was less preferable in Sydney
with
approximately 45%. Inhabitants in Change preposition
at
other
three cities Correct article usage
the other
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including
Brisbane
, Adelian, and Melbourne
drank instant coffee
at 52%, 50%, and 48% respectively.
Looking at the percentage of buying fresh coffee
in last
4 weeks Correct article usage
the last
it is clear that
this
group wasn't the preferences
in all these cities. In Fix the agreement mistake
preference
Sydney
, people more enjoyed this
kind of coffee
in comparison with others at about 43%. After that, 42% and 36% percentage of Melbourne
and Hobart
's citizens purchase fresh coffee
. The figures for Brisbane
and Adelaide were equal with 34% which is the lower rate.Submitted by kmibehnaz98 on
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