Many people think that the government should not restrict what people say in public media as it is part of freedom of speech. To what extent do you agree to this statement?
Many
people
believe that,
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freedom
of speech
will be established when the sayings of people
in public media
will not be interfered by
the state. I personally agree with Change preposition
with by
this
viewpoint, because freedom
of speech
is one of the democratic rights of the people
and for the sake of the country
, the thoughts and speech
of people
need to be expressed.
On the one hand, it is the right of the people
to talk about their feelings, thoughts and desires because a democratic country
commits that. Therefore
, the government will mitigate the opportunity of expression of the citizens if they decide what people
should say in public media
and what should not. In Bangladesh, for example
, the government restricted the speech
of people
in 2019 through the "Digital Security Act" which is actually refraining people
from speaking their hearts in the public media
. Consequently
, it is breaching the freedom
of speech
of people
and violating democratic rights.
On the other hand
, it is imperative that,
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media
is a useful means of communication and one of the best ways of expressing public feelings. It is essential to circulate and broadcast public feelings in media
because public media
are actually the mirror of the society as well as
the country
. Public opinion is required for numerous reasons such
as learning about public well-being, economic development, and social justice. If it is restricted, the actual conditions of a country
will not be exposed and analysed which will not be beneficial for the country
's development. In Uganda, the restriction of public opinion has threatened the social and economic development of the country
.
In conclusion, freedom
of speech
should be ensured not only to establish democracy but also
it is needed for the betterment of the country
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