The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the amount number of people, divided into male and female, of world
illiteracy
rates
by region for the
last
year. South Asia and Arab States have the highest world
illiteracy
index, as it reaches almost 50% on average for the former, and around 40% on average for the latter. The standing is followed by Africa and East Asia on the fourth, hitting 35% and 15% both on average. Latin America has the second lowest rank with only 13%,
while
Developed Countries, surprisingly,
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only 2% of the
illiteracy
rates
. One noticeable feature is that women have higher
illiteracy
rates
than men.
This
fact is interesting because it happens in every region.
However
, in Latin American and developed countries, the comparison of
rates
between males and females
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not significant, with the estimated difference
of
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percentage
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between 1-3%. Compared to the other four regions, the domination is influenced by women,
as well as
the percentage of men’s
illiteracy
index is only one-third of the women’s.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Illiteracy rates
  • Region
  • Gender disparity
  • Bar chart
  • Estimated
  • Summarise
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Analyzing
  • Discrepancies
  • Significant
  • Pronounced
  • Speculation
  • Male
  • Female
  • Global perspective
  • Literacy
  • Educational attainment
  • Socio-economic factors
  • Cultural influences
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