the chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

the chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
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the bar chart illustrates the changes in the proportion of
households
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owning and renting
accommodation
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in England and Wales in about a century from 1918 to 2011.
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the percentage of
households
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in owned
accommodation
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was substantially lower than those in rented
accommodation
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till 1971. after the year 1971, the share of
households
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owning
accommodation
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had started to rise. In 1918
households
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in owned
accommodation
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with 23%, had its lowest share in the market
while
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renting
accommodation
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experienced its peak in England and Wales with 77%. After that owning
accommodation
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increased to 31% in 1939,
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households
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in rent
accommodation
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dropped to 69%,
this
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number stayed constant in 1953. The chart continued changing that 41% of people were living in their own houses in 1961,
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59% had rented the place they were staying in. A significant shift occurred by 1971 when for the first time, the percentages almost equalized at 50% after that ownership started overtaking renting trends in 1981 owned accommodations share was more than rented
accommodation
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with 60% and 40% respectively. The trend continued emerging with a steady increase in the proportion of owned
households
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reaching a peak in 2001 at approximately 70%.
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, the percentage of rented
households
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declined constantly, hitting its lowest point at about 30% in the same year.
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, in the
last
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decade shown, from 2001 to 2011, there was a slight
reversed
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of
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trend. The percentage of owned
households
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decreased to just below 65%,
while
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rented
accommodation
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saw a rise to around 35%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words households, accommodation with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • ownership
  • tenancy
  • trend
  • fluctuation
  • proportion
  • residence
  • dwelling
  • shift
  • transition
  • migration
  • fluctuate
  • stabilize
  • rise
  • fall
  • increase
  • decrease
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