* The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The chart illustrates information regarding the individual's
coffee
and tea
consumption in five diverse cities in Australia.
According to
the given data, the
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apply
coffee
and tea
usage in the
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apply
cafe
is more popular among the five cities and the highest amount of Fix the agreement mistake
cafes
this
consumption belongs to Melbourne, Hobart, Sydney, Brisbane and Adelaide respectively (about 63%, 62%, 61%, 56%, and 49%). However
, the popularity of drinking coffee
and tea
in cafes is in close competition by
instant Change preposition
with
coffee
in Adelaide.
In the end, there is less popularity related to buying fresh coffee
among
these locations. Change preposition
in
The fresh
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Fresh
coffee
has the high
consumption among these cities respectively (Sydney about 44%, Melbourne about 42%, Horbat about 38%, Adelaide about 35%, and Brisbane about 34%).
Correct word choice
highest
To sum up
, the coffee
and tea
are used in the three various ways among the Australians. The former the usage of coffee
in cafes has the most popularity and the latter the instant coffee
. The lowest demand finally
belongs to fresh coffee
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, tea with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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