The given graph shows the consumption of fast food in the UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart displays the consumption of fast food in the UK between 1970 to 1990, having features
such
as hamburgers, fish
and chips
and pizza.
Overall
, junk food like hamburgers and fish
and chips
had increased significantly over the entire time and the category of pizza had a gradual decrease to get stable at one point.
Burgers and fish
and chips
represent the biggest consumption of unhealthy food in this
country, increasing considerably every year. However
, Fish
and chips
were the biggest overall
compared with the other two, this
one increased from less than 100 to 500 during those years. Also
, Hamburgers in the category of one with major consumers achieved almost 300 in its maximum in 1990.
Besides
, the pizza category started at over 300 and decreased slightly to 200 in 1985 to later get in almost 2010, representing a stable with fewer consumers between 1970 and 1990Submitted by jennitobon16 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, chips with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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