The given graph shows the consumption of fast food in the UK (per week) from 1970 to 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line chart displays the consumption of fast food in the UK between 1970 to 1990, having features
such
as hamburgers, Linking Words
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
and pizza.
Use synonyms
Overall
, junk food like hamburgers and Linking Words
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
had increased significantly over the entire time and the category of pizza had a gradual decrease to get stable at one point.
Burgers and Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
represent the biggest consumption of unhealthy food in Use synonyms
this
country, increasing considerably every year. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
Fish
and Use synonyms
chips
were the biggest Use synonyms
overall
compared with the other two, Linking Words
this
one increased from less than 100 to 500 during those years. Linking Words
Also
, Hamburgers in the category of one with major consumers achieved almost 300 in its maximum in 1990.
Linking Words
Besides
, the pizza category started at over 300 and decreased slightly to 200 in 1985 to later get in almost 2010, representing a stable with fewer consumers between 1970 and 1990Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, chips with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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