The following chart show the results of a British survey taken in 2009 related to Housing preferences of UK people.

The following chart show the results of a British survey taken in 2009 related to Housing preferences of UK people.
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The bar chart illustrates the comparison of housing preferences in the UK as the result of a survey taken in 2009.
Overall
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, among the three cities, people in the UK have different tastes towards the place they want to live. In Liverpool, citizens there tend to live in apartments.
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, in London and Manchester, numerous people prefer to live in semi-detached houses rather than any other option. From the data above we can see that, in Liverpool, approximately 60% of people joining the survey chose an apartment as their comfortable place to live.
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, it seems like
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there do not like to live in a terraced building (under 10%).
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, the majority of respondents in London and Manchester choose semi-detached houses as their housing preferences, both of them get similar numbers at 38%.
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, the Manchester respondent's second choice is
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house which hits around 37%.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Housing preferences
  • Survey
  • Detached house
  • Terraced house
  • Flat/apartment
  • Urban
  • Rural
  • Demographics
  • Homeownership
  • Renting
  • Property prices
  • Economic factors
  • Life stage
  • Cultural attitudes
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