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IN MANY PARTS OF THE WORLD, ILLITERACY RATES ARE STILL HIGH. WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE THE CAUSES OF THIS? WHAT SOLUTIONS CAN YOU SUGGEST?

#parts #world #illiteracy #rates
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still
 have
a low literacy rates
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low literacy rates
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. The reason behind
this
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is
because
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 they do not find topics that interesting for them to read yet.
Also
,
people
 are too lazy to buy or rent
books
 from the
store
. In order to solve
this
, it is by using media involvement which
help
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 to letting
people
now
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know
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 if reading is fun because there are
variety
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 of
books
 that they can explore,
not to mention
 they can find many types of readings on the internet. Lately, there are still many
of
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people
 that have lack
of
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interest
to read
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in reading
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books
. The main
causes
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from
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this
issues
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because
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that
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 they still do not find the
right
 topic to explore.
For example
,
people
are tend
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 to think that reading obligates them to find something educational.
However
,
this
 mindset is totally wrong because
right
 now there are a lot of writers that offer fiction
books
 with amazing stories.
Not to mention
,
this
 type of genre
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 have certain lessons if
people
 can truly understand the story itself. Other than boring, sometimes
people
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 lazy to purchase or even rent
book
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books
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 from the
store
. Because most of them still have the mindset,
if
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 they want to read they can only do
this
 by
purchase
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purchasing
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 the physical one. These problems can
be solve
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be solved
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 by letting them know if reading is fun
,
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 if they can find the
right
 topics that they
interested
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are interested
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,
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in
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 if
they
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they are
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 lazy to go out they can search
these
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books
from
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on
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 online website or even buy the online version
one
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. In my experience, I used to hate
books
 because I
tought
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thought
 that reading
is
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was
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 boring.
However
, when I went into one of the book's
store
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 in my city, I
founded
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 a fiction book called "Harry Potter. From that
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specific
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 really obsessed
to read
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with reading
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 more
of
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fiction
books
, but if run out of
my
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readings, I usually get
pretty
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too
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 lazy to find them on the offline
store
, so I tried to search
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for it
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it
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them
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 on the internet. It truly helps me because it
very
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convinient
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convenient
 and
have
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offers
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 many options.
To sum up
, most
people
 from around the world still have high illiteracy rates. It is because they still have not
find
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the
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 interesting topic to read yet,
also
 they
just
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are just
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 too lazy to find
books
 from the offline
store
. To conquer
this
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these
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 issues, it is by using media involvement and letting them know that reading is fun
,
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apply
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 if they
be
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are
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 able to find the
right
 topic.
Not to mention
, they can find their readings through the internet.
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