The chart below shows how much energy is provided by four different sources in Italy, and the table below shows how much of this energy is used for four different household purposes.

The chart below shows how much energy is provided by four different sources in Italy, and the table below shows how much of this energy is used for four different household purposes.
The chart illustrates the amount of
energy
is
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apply
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provided by
some
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different sources in a European country, and the table outlines
proportion
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the proportion
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of
this
energy
is
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consumed for four different household purposes.
Overall
,
it is clear that
non'renewable
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nonrenewable
non-renewable
and renewable
energy
is provided in Italy,
then
coal and Gas are much more than wind and
sola
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solar
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.
By
contrast
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contrast,
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the table depicts heating and appliance as twice many charging and lighting. Looking at the details non-renewable
energy
supplied about above 80%,
although
renewable
energy
supported approximately under 20
percent
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per cent
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. Next coal provided three times much more than solar. With
regarding
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on
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the table, heating and appliances above 20 and
former
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the former
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once much more than
latter
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the latter
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consumed in Italy.
On the other
hand
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charging is the fewest
energy
household aimed and lighting almost once much more than charging. all in all appliances and heating are used a lot and charging is the smallest
energy
is
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consumption in a European country.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 3 times.

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