The diagram details the process of producing olive oil. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram details the process of producing olive oil. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The
process
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diagram depicts how olive
oil
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is produced which is a
man - made
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man-made
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process
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.
Overall
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, The
process
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of producing olive
oil
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has six stages commencing with harvesting and ending with storage or direct into the refining.
Firstly
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, the
process
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started with olives being harvested and kept in a collection vat.
Then
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, it is directed to the
process
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of
deleafing
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deleting
de-leafing
and washing before being crushed in the olive mill.The
oil
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paste
,
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apply
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is
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is then headed
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then
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heads to the malaxer which below
at
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27 C degrees. After the malaxer, it enters a centrifugal press, which
produce
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produces
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virgin
oil
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and pomace, which can be processed
further
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at refining factories.
On the other hand
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,virgin
oil
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can be
seperated
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separated
,which
seperates
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separates
waste water
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wastewater
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or decanted, which filters out both solids and water. Both
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separated
seperated
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separated
or decanted
oilive
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olive
oil
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can be stored in a storage tank to complete the
overall
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process
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,
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, oil with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultivation
  • Harvesting
  • Mechanical harvesting
  • Impurities
  • Pressing
  • Cold press
  • Hot press
  • Extraction
  • Centrifugation
  • Separation
  • Storage
  • Bottling
  • Nutritional value
  • Extra virgin
  • Virgin
  • Pure olive oil
  • Climate conditions
  • Soil conditions
  • Traditional methods
  • Modern methods
  • Labeling
  • Quality preservation
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