The diagram details the process of producing olive oil. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The
process
diagram depicts how olive oil
is produced which is a man - made
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man-made
process
.
Overall
, The process
of producing olive oil
has six stages commencing with harvesting and ending with storage or direct into the refining.
Firstly
, the process
started with olives being harvested and kept in a collection vat.Then
, it is directed to the process
of deleafing
and washing before being crushed in the olive mill.The Correct your spelling
deleting
de-leafing
oil
paste,
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apply
is
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is then headed
is then heading
then
heads to the malaxer which below at
27 C degrees. After the malaxer, it enters a centrifugal press, which Change preposition
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produce
virgin Change the verb form
produces
oil
and pomace, which can be processed further
at refining factories.
On the other hand
,virgin oil
can be seperated
,which Correct your spelling
separated
seperates
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separates
waste water
or decanted, which filters out both solids and water. Both Correct your spelling
wastewater
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separated
seperated
or decanted Correct your spelling
separated
oilive
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olive
oil
can be stored in a storage tank to complete the overall
process
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