The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course

The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course
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bar
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depicts a comparison between female and
men
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participating in different educational courses in 2009. The pie
chart
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depicts the ages of all the attendees in the evening sessions. It is clear from the graph that in each course the women were higher than gentleman except in sculpture where the
men
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were higher.
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, the participants aged 50 or over were the greatest category in the education centre in 2009.
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what is shown in the bar
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, the women in the language course were the top one about 40 women. At the same time, the
men
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were around 20 which was the second biggest for them.
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, in the sculpture lessons were the smallest by less than 10,
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the
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were 10. As for the pie
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for ages, the attending who were 50 years or old took approximately 42% of the chairs of the centre.
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, whose ages under 20 were the lowest proportion nearest to 5 per cent in 2009
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