You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not want this development Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam
Hope you are well
I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with the article Correct pronoun usage
that was
was
Correct pronoun usage
that was
puplished
in your newspaper Correct your spelling
published
last
week ,whichVerb problem
apply
was
described about Unnecessary verb
apply
expension
of our local Correct your spelling
expansion
extension
airport
's feild's
Correct your spelling
field's
Fix the agreement mistake
planes
plane
and Fix the agreement mistake
planes
therefore
,Correct article usage
the increase
increase
number of flights that will Correct article usage
the increase
transfer
caused by it.
I Verb problem
be
am
living Wrong verb form
have been
nearby
the local Correct your spelling
near
airport
for almost five years.When the
Correct article usage
apply
airplanes
want Change the spelling
aeroplanes
taking
off or Change the verb form
to take
landing
,they make too Wrong verb form
land
much
noises Change the quantifier
many
that
is
really bothersome and disturb us .Change the verb form
are
On the other hand
,when we are going to do school
run or go shopping and so on,we usually get stuck in heavy Correct article usage
a school
treffic
dueCorrect your spelling
traffic
transfering
of Correct your spelling
transferring
airport's
passengers.Now ,I am sure you can imagine what will Change noun form
airport
happend
after the Correct your spelling
happen
airport
expension
.
In my point of view,it will be more effective if you ask Correct your spelling
explosion
locals
Change noun form
locals'
local's
ideas
about Change preposition
for ideas
this
matter and write an article to compare advantages
and Correct article usage
the advantages
disadvatages
of Correct your spelling
disadvantages
this
decision.
I hope you will consider my feedback .l
look forward to hearing from you .
Many thanks for your attention and cooperation Change preposition
apply
to
Change preposition
on
this
subject .
Yours sincerly
SinaCorrect your spelling
sincerely
Submitted by sinamousavi078 on
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Task Achievement
Make sure to address all points of the task adequately. Expand on the reasons why you do not want the airport development with clear and specific examples. This will strengthen the task achievement score.
Coherence & Cohesion
Use a variety of cohesive devices (e.g., firstly, secondly, in addition) to structure the argument logically. Avoid repetition of phrases to improve cohesion.
Task Achievement
The introduction and closing phrases are polite and appropriate, but ensure they are more formal and varied to enhance tone suitability.
Coherence & Cohesion
Separate ideas into distinct paragraphs - each paragraph should convey a single idea. Enhance readability by focusing on one point at a time.
Coherence & Cohesion
Check grammar and punctuation to ensure clarity. This includes correct use of commas, periods, and pronoun references.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
