The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram displays the procedure of instant
noodles
being made. Use synonyms
Overall
, the process requires 8 steps that are connected in one production, starting from the cultivation of the flour Linking Words
that is
being made into dough, strips formed, cooking, and packaging.
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To begin
with, the flour substance from a storage silos is needed to be transformed into a machine that will mix the flour and water Linking Words
as well as
oil. Linking Words
As a result
, the mixer produced dough in the form of sheets. To create Linking Words
noodles
, the dough is cut into thin strips, and Use synonyms
then
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subsequently
turned into discs before continuing into the next step, which is cooked with oil.
After the Linking Words
noodles
are already dry, the Use synonyms
noodles
are placed into numerous glasses. Later on, each cup is flavoured with vegetables and spicy sauces. The manufacturing process is done, and the Use synonyms
noodles
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finally
reach their packaging step, which is labelling and sealing. In Linking Words
this
step, the company's labels are put on every cup Linking Words
along with
the product's sealing to make sure that the product is safe and secure before selling.Linking Words
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