The maps below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps show the comparison of the layout of the university
sports
centre today to future development plans.
Overall
, the current sports
centre will be expanded and integrated into one spacious place. It will be followed by various additional supporting facilities.
The obvious and drastic changes will be made on both sides of the area. On the western side, there is a plan to develop a leisure pool accompanied by a changing room. In the opposite direction, there will be a sports
shop just beside the room for changing. In contrast
, there will be built a cafe, sports
hall, and two dance studios on the eastern.
Conversely
, there is not going to be much innovation in the centre hall. It is still the same zone with a pool, room for change, and a gym. In front of them
there is still a reception for people to ask Add a comma
them,
Change preposition
for informations
informations
. One thing that stands out the most is the expansion of the gym that will reach the newly built dance studio.Change the wording
information
pieces of information
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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