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Band 5.5

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.

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The
two
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 maps below illustrate the changes in
road
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 access to a hospital city after a 4-year period, from 2007 to 2010. What stands out from the maps is that the
road
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 to the city hospital has been modernized. The most significant change is that the staff car park and the one for the public have been divided into
two
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 sections. A public car park has been constructed east of the hospital on the ring
road
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, and a staff car park was moved east of the hospital
road
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 between
two
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 roundabouts southeast of the ring
road
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. The old bus stop had been knocked down, and a new modern bus station was built. The bus station has
two
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 specific roads that people can get to from both roundabouts in the north and south. The
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 roundabouts and dividing the parking may help people get to the city hospital more quickly.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic flow
  • road access
  • ring road
  • bus stops
  • bus station
  • congestion
  • parking facilities
  • pedestrian crossings
  • vehicular flow
  • organizational structure
  • accessibility
  • enhancements
  • configuration
  • dedicated
  • diverting traffic
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