The maps below show the centre of a small twon called Islip is it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The maps depict the current
plan
of the Islip town centre and its plan
after the redevelopment.
Overall
, it's clear that town
centre is to be Correct article usage
the town
brought-up-to
date, with the construction of some modern facilities, a new Correct your spelling
brought up to
road
system and more housing.
When it comes to the current plan
, there is a main road
running east-west through the town center
and there are Change the spelling
centre
shops
near the main road
.This
road
has two side roads, one leading to the school at
the southwest and Change preposition
on
other
Correct article usage
the other
heads
to the park Replace the word
heading
which
on the southeast.In the future Correct pronoun usage
apply
plan
, the main road
is going to be turned into a ring road
which is called dual
carriageway covers new facilities and houses.
All the Correct article usage
a dual
shops
on the north side going to be replaced by bus
station, shopping centre,car park, and a new housing scheme Correct article usage
a bus
while
the main road
is to be pedestrianized.
To the south of the map
there are some Add a comma
map,
shops
and housing.The shops
are to remain unchanged, whereas
the housing is to be relocated.And also
, park
and the school Correct article usage
the park
are remained
the same.Change to the active voice
remain
have remained
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