The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The two pictures depict information about
marital
Add an article
the marital
status
of citizens, broken down into two different countries. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall
, it is noticeable that most people in both countries, Canada
and Australia
, are
have been married. Unnecessary verb
apply
Furthermore
, the highest proportion of the status
is separated but not divorced in Canada
, and married status
has the biggest percentage in Australia
.
In Canada
, the status
of separated but not divorced has highest
value Change the article
the highest
accounted
for 53% compared to Wrong verb form
accounting
Australia
which has slightly more than a third at 41%. Conversely
, there was only 29% married status
in Canada
as opposed to Australia
which has almost double
Wrong verb form
doubled
at
46%. Change preposition
to
Similarly
, the percentage of divorced status
for the former was very low number at just 1%, and the latter has double
Wrong verb form
doubled
at
2% though Change preposition
to
this
figure was remained
low. There was Change to the active voice
remained
has remained
Correct article usage
an absent
absent
of Replace the word
absence
same sex
marriage Add a hyphen
same-sex
status
in Australia
, whereas
in Canada
still existed at 3%. Moreover
, the proportion of the rest marital
information between Change preposition
of marital
Canada
and Australia
has a slight discrepancy approximately
1.5%Change preposition
of approximately
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Vocabulary: Replace the words status, canada, australia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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