The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

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The pie charts compare the number of unhealthy ingredients namely

sodium

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, saturated fat, and added sugar, in ordinary meals which are consumed by Americans.

Overall

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, dinner is the most unhealthy meal among all other meals and has the highest proportion of

sodium

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and saturated fat,

while

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breakfast has the least harmful nutrients. As can be seen from the charts, dinner stands at first place having

sodium

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and fat, accounting for 43 and 37. Followed by lunch, the share of that for

sodium

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is 29,

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saturated fat is 3 lower. In terms of breakfast and snacks, both have the same share of

sodium

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at 14,

while

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saturated fat is 16 and 21 respectively. the latter is responsible for the highest figure of added sugar(42,

on the other hand

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, the former has the lowest amount at 16.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words sodium with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

136 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Nutrients
Unhealthy
Daily intake
Percentage
Carbohydrates
Fats
Proteins
Meals
Balanced diet
Consumption
Excess
Health implications
Obesity
Diabetes
Heart disease
Convenience foods
Fast foods
Socioeconomic factors
Lifestyle choices
Healthy eating habits
Dietary recommendations

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The chart below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping malls or centres to do their shopping. Does this have a positive or a negative development?

Most societies are based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they wanted, society could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree?