The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the line graph provided reveals some information about price changes in three different metals, namely
copper
, nickel
, and zinc over the year 2014.
Overall
, it is clear that
nickel
recorded a significant fall in price, while
figures for copper
and nickel
, despite some fluctuations, remained relatively the same at the end
end of the period.
In
the beginning of 2014, Change the preposition
At
Nickel
used to be the most valuable metal prior to a sharp decrease from six
Correct article usage
a six
percent
change in January to one Change the spelling
per cent
percent
in March, meanwhile Change the spelling
per cent
copper
witnessed a mere reduction from two percent
to approximately half Change the spelling
per cent
percent
. From January to February zinc reached Change the spelling
per cent
to
a peak of three Change preposition
apply
percent
change before hitting an Change the spelling
per cent
all time
low of -1% in June; Add a hyphen
all-time
similarly
nickel
and copper
experienced their lowest price in June.
From June to the end of the period figures for all three materials show striking similarities. Following in slight increase in value they all leveled off from July to September, prior to a mere fall between September and October and sharp
rise in November. By December, prices for all of them altered between one and two Add an article
a sharp
the sharp
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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