The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A glance at the line graph provided reveals some information about price changes in three different metals, namely
copper
,
nickel
, and zinc over the year 2014.
Overall
,
it is clear that
nickel
recorded a significant fall in price,
while
figures for
copper
and
nickel
, despite some fluctuations, remained relatively the same
at the end
end of the period.
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the beginning of 2014,
Nickel
used to be the most valuable metal prior to a sharp decrease from
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percent
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change in January to one
percent
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in March, meanwhile
copper
witnessed a mere reduction from two
percent
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to approximately half
percent
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. From January to February zinc reached
to
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a peak of three
percent
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change before hitting an
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low of -1% in June;
similarly
nickel
and
copper
experienced their lowest price in June. From June to the end of the period figures for all three materials show striking similarities. Following in slight increase in value they all leveled off from July to September, prior to a mere fall between September and October and
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rise in November. By December, prices for all of them altered between one and two
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.

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  • fluctuate
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  • peak
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  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
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