PEOPLE ARE BECOMING MORE AND MORE OBESE. What are the reasons of this problem and how can this be solved?

Obesity

has

becoming

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a significant issue

amongst

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society in

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recent years. Sedanter lifestyle and

rising

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prevelance

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prevalence

of fast

food

consumption are accepted

the

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two essential causes of

the

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obesity

by experts.

This

essay will explain these reasons in detail, and provide viable solutions, like increasing daily active hours

,

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and encouraging

people

to eat healthy foods. One of the possible reasons

of

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the increasing number of

overweigh

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overweight

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people

is the decline in

people

's active hours. Since many individuals are likely to use motorized

vehicle

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vehicles

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in order to

commmute

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commute

compute

,

instead

of cycling or walking, they burn

less

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calories.

Hence

, these men and women tend to gain weight in the long term.

Secondly

,

due to

the increase in the number of fast

food

chains across the world,

people

may eat burgers and french fries

with

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paying less than

healtier

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healthier

alternatives

such

as salads, or plant-based meals.

Moreover

, owing to the hustle

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life, individuals

do

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not eager to spend time

for

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eating, with that perspective, eating a burger may seem a good way

for saving

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their

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time. When these two factors

added

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together, they may result in a synergistic impact on

people

's health, and inevitably, lead to

higher

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a higher

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level

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levels

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of

obesity

amongts

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amongst

among

the

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society. There are some significant steps, which may make a world of

differences

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difference

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in terms of reducing the

obesity

level. Considering the reasons,

fistly

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firstly

, providing

more

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active lifestyle to individuals would be a viable solution. The more

people

have more physical

activitiy

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activity

in their life by using stairs

instead

of elevators, they tend to stay fit.

Therefore

, they may face less risk

for

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suffering from

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obesity

compared to

the

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less active

people

.

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, encouraging workers

cycling

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to cycle

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for commuting

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to commute

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may enhance

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the employer's

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employer's

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employees's

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daily activities, as they burn more calories,

they

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and they

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can keep their physical health without making

huge

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effort

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like

go

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to a gym after work. Another solution would provide easy access to healthier alternatives, like salads, or soups. Since lower prices may be

ofeered

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offered

by

food

chain companies , many

people

, especially teenagers are likely to prefer to eat burgers

,

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or fries. In order to break

this

pattern, authorities may provide

to

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their citizens

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with nutrious

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nutrious

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nutritious

alternatives like

vegetables

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meals

in

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at

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affordable prices.

For instance

, a company in the UK, which made

enable

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healtier

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healthier

foods

in

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at

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cheaper

price

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prices

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for its

epmloyees

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employees

,

indicate

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that the rate of obese workers decreased dramatically.

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, it is undeniable that

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obesity

is

oone

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one

of the most essential issues these days.

Sedentary

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lifestyle

,

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and the change of preferences towards consuming fast foods are the most sounding causes.

By encouraging

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more active

lifesytle

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lifestyles

, and providing easier access to

healtier

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healthier

food

options would be accepted as reasonable solutions.