The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
The
portray
below shows an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
Over the period, the island witnessed dramatic transformations from a completely bare land to a tourist stop.
A beach used to be abandoned in the past, Replace the word
portrayal
however
nowadays it has become a swimming area. Next to the beach, several accommodations were built. Moreover
, footpaths were built surrounding the accommodations. Moving to the north area, a restaurant was established along with
a vehicle track, which was connected to the reception in front of the restaurant. Moreover
, a pier was added making it easier for visitors and yachts to access the area. Few trees were cut to facilitate the construction, as can be seen.
In summary, the island had transformed in many areas; but a bare land remained in the north-eastern
part. The newly added amenities would facilitate the tourists to stay and enjoy the place.Correct your spelling
northeastern
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