The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Norbiton industrial
area
consists of a main plaza
, and
a Correct word choice
apply
road
going east to a road
of factories and a road
going south that connects to the main road
that goes to town. North from
the main Change preposition
of
area
, there's a
farmland across a river. The planned future development of Norbiton gives some significant changes to the Remove the article
apply
area
. Where there initially
was
just two roads from the Correct subject-verb agreement
were
plaza
, now there are two more roads, one going to a residential area
northwest from
the Change preposition
of
plaza
, and a road
going to the farmland north, with a bridge over the river. Across the river, there's now also
some residential housing aside from the initial farmland. The main plaza
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
initially
was
surrounded by factories now Unnecessary verb
apply
have
some shops and a medical centre to facilitate access for the residents. The Change the verb form
has
road
east of the plaza
that initially
leads to some factories now hosts some education buildings, with a school at the very end of the road
, and a playground north of it. Three residential housings are also
there in
the main eastern Change preposition
on
road
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