The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The Norbiton industrial
area
consists of a main Use synonyms
plaza
, Use synonyms
and
a Correct word choice
apply
road
going east to a Use synonyms
road
of factories and a Use synonyms
road
going south that connects to the main Use synonyms
road
that goes to town. North Use synonyms
from
the main Change preposition
of
area
, there's Use synonyms
a
farmland across a river. The planned future development of Norbiton gives some significant changes to the Remove the article
apply
area
. Where there Use synonyms
initially
Linking Words
was
just two roads from the Correct subject-verb agreement
were
plaza
, now there are two more roads, one going to a residential Use synonyms
area
northwest Use synonyms
from
the Change preposition
of
plaza
, and a Use synonyms
road
going to the farmland north, with a bridge over the river. Across the river, there's now Use synonyms
also
some residential housing aside from the initial farmland. The main Linking Words
plaza
Use synonyms
that
Correct pronoun usage
apply
initially
Linking Words
was
surrounded by factories now Unnecessary verb
apply
have
some shops and a medical centre to facilitate access for the residents. The Change the verb form
has
road
east of the Use synonyms
plaza
that Use synonyms
initially
leads to some factories now hosts some education buildings, with a school at the very end of the Linking Words
road
, and a playground north of it. Three residential housings are Use synonyms
also
there Linking Words
in
the main eastern Change preposition
on
road
.Use synonyms
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