The given bar chart shows the difference of the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian cities between 2001 and 2006.
The bar chart depicts changes in
five
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the five
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the year
year
2001 and 2006 of the Change to a plural noun
years
internatioal
students shared through Correct your spelling
international
university
grauduates
in multiple Canadian cities Correct your spelling
graduates
in
Change preposition
apply
the
. It is clear from the graph Correct article usage
apply
the
highest Correct word choice
that the
percentage
recorded
in New Add a missing verb
was recorded
Brunswick
in 2006.
The significant increased
was in British Columbia by more than double Replace the word
increase
achieved
almost 11% in 2006. Wrong verb form
achieving
The
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apply
Brunswick
stand
out with the highest Wrong verb form
stood
percentage
in 2006 higher than 5%, and jumped to nearby
13% in 2006. The second most shared Correct your spelling
nearly
university
is Nova Scotia with a little lower than New Brunswick
.
Moreover
, in the middle average according to
the graph was
Alberta Unnecessary verb
apply
university
achieved Capitalize word
University
the
fourth which is slightly lower than Quebec Correct article usage
apply
university
. Manitoba Capitalize word
University
and
Newfoundland and Labrador universities remain the same Correct word choice
apply
percentage
in 2001 and 2006. However
, Ontario university
recorded the lowest Capitalize word
University
percentage
.
To sum up
, we could say that the
New Correct article usage
apply
Brunswick
university
achieved the highest Capitalize word
University
percentage
. In addition
, the
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apply
british
Columbia recorded the highest changes.Change the capitalization
British
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