Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: -Introduce yourself. -Explain what the problem is. -Suggest solutions to the problem.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to complain about our area that has been having a high level of noise

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the music played by some people the whole night. I am Priya, reside in the Mehta building, and have been living here since 2015. Being a leader of my residential area, it is my responsibility to inform you about the issues that people are facing nowadays. Past few weeks, some people have become used to playing loud music not even till 12 or 1 AM but all night.

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is causing great trouble for others, and especially for those who are getting treatments for their health conditions including me with a headache. I have warned several times and even requested them multiple times, but they are ignorant and continue to do it. One thing that I could recommend is to implement some stringent laws to limit the time for music, and

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, rule breakers should be penalized by leaving space for another area. I would be most grateful if could reply as soon as possible so that

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matter can be resolved to everyone's satisfaction. Thank

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your consideration, Yours faithfully, Priya

neetpunarMon Jan 22 2024

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task achievement

Make sure you address all points of the task clearly. In this case, the letter needed to address the issue of noise due to street work rather than from people playing music.

coherence cohesion

Try to keep one main idea per paragraph for clarity, and make each paragraph distinct and well-developed with enough elaboration on each idea.

coherence cohesion

Use transitional phrases to improve the flow between paragraphs and ideas.

task achievement

Be consistent with the register and formal tone when addressing the local council in a letter of complaint. Avoid informal language and use polite requests.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

195 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Local council
Disturbance
Resident
Noise pollution
Disruption
Work-from-home
Well-being
Adequate notice
Inconvenience
Noise control measures
Temporary relocation
Work schedule
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Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you. Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter: -Introduce yourself. -Explain what the problem is. -Suggest solutions to the problem.

some people work for the same organisation all their working life. others think that it is better to work for different organisation. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The best way to improve health is to exercise daily. To what extent do you agree?

Some people think that students should study in their own city. However, many students prefer to study far away from their home. Do the advantages of studying away from home outweigh the disadvantages

Some people say that no one should do the same job forever, others believe that doing the same job is beneficial for the individual company and society. Discuss both views and give you open your opinion.