The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The visual data given shows the policy
budget
for 2017 and 2018 in a British region. There are two types of data present, a table that shows the sources of financial funds
and a pie chart that shows how the budget
was allocated. Overall
, there was an increase
in funds
from 2017 to 2018, and most of the budget
was used on salaries.
There was clearly an increase
in income from 304.7 million
in 2017 to 318.6 million
in 2018. The increase
mainly came from local taxes, with an addition of 11.1 million
from 91.2 in 2017 to 102.3 million
in 2018. Aside from that, a slight rise of around 2 million
from the national government and around 0.5 million
from other sources is present.
Aside from the rise in funding, there were also
changes in the money allocation in this
area. From the initial 75% of the funds
used for salaries, it decreased to just 69% in 2018. The budget
for technology nearly doubled from 8% in 2017 to 14% in 2018. Meanwhile, the allocated funds
for buildings and transport remained stagnant at 17%.
In conclusion, the main source of funding came from the national government, and most of it is spent on the wages for officers and staff. There was an increase
in funds
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