The Chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed men and women of different employment status. Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph depicts information about the proportion of free
time
between males and females from 1998 to 1999, broken down into five different employment conditions. The figures are measured in Use synonyms
hours
.
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Overall
, it is noticeable that there is a similar amount of leisure Linking Words
time
spent by the two sexes which are in retirement and out of work. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it is Linking Words
also
interesting to note that more males than females, in all types of occupational status, spend their free Linking Words
time
generally.
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In terms
retired people and those who are out of work have the highest proportion of enjoying their free Change preposition
Terms
time
, achieving 80 Use synonyms
hours
for men which Use synonyms
was
slightly different from women who spent approximately 75 Change the verb form
were
hours
. Use synonyms
Similarly
, men who had full-Linking Words
time
employment enjoyed their leisure Use synonyms
time
for 50 Use synonyms
hours
compared with women were spent more than a third for about 38 Use synonyms
hours
. The other categories, employed part-Use synonyms
time
and housewives, had a medium proportion of spending leisure Use synonyms
time
for 45 Use synonyms
hours
on average.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, hours with synonyms.
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