The Chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed men and women of different employment status. Write at least 150 words.
The bar graph depicts information about the proportion of free
time
between males and females from 1998 to 1999, broken down into five different employment conditions. The figures are measured in hours
.
Overall
, it is noticeable that there is a similar amount of leisure time
spent by the two sexes which are in retirement and out of work. Moreover
, it is also
interesting to note that more males than females, in all types of occupational status, spend their free time
generally.
In terms
retired people and those who are out of work have the highest proportion of enjoying their free Change preposition
Terms
time
, achieving 80 hours
for men which was
slightly different from women who spent approximately 75 Change the verb form
were
hours
. Similarly
, men who had full-time
employment enjoyed their leisure time
for 50 hours
compared with women were spent more than a third for about 38 hours
. The other categories, employed part-time
and housewives, had a medium proportion of spending leisure time
for 45 hours
on average.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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