the graph compare the number of train passengers and percentage of train running on time from 1995 to 2004.

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number

of train

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passengers

and the

percentage

of time punctuality from 1995 to 2004.

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,

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first graph shows that

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significants

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significant

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changes

of

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train passengers

reached

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more than 40 people in 2009.

While

the other graph shows the comparison of the

percentage

of trains running on time and the target. It

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can be seen that the

number

decreased in 2003 to

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35

passegers

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passengers

.

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number

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increased dramatically until reached more than 45 people.

However

, from 2005 to 2008 the

number

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steadily decreased to 40 citizens.

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, the

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passengers

in 2009 gradually increased by more than two people.

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second graph shows the comparison between the train's time punctuality and the

standart

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target. From 2000 to 2002 it is

number

noticeably rose to 95

percent

.

Then

, the

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still increased hit to 96

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.

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the

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able to

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the

standart

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line, from 2004 to 2006

it

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is numbers

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pludge

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plunged

to 92

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, which is

same

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as the first year.

Morever

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Moreover

in 2008, the

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less than 100

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.

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Lastly

, the

percentage

remained constant until 2009 to 97

percent

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.