You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The line graph illustrates the number of passengers at the London Underground Station.
Overall
, the station experienced a significant
fluctution
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fluctuation
fluctuations
with an hour duration between 6am
until
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and
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10pm. As the graph shows, the busiest time
of
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for
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visitors is 07.00 and 18.00, which is 400 and over 350 people respectively.
Whereas
, the crowd rarely trip by train at 6am and 4pm accounted for 100 people
in
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both times. In the beginning, the number of passengers stood at a hundred folk in the early morning, at 6 o'clock,
then
reached a peak of 400 visitors at 08.00.
Then
, it declined steadily until it fell to 200 users at 10.00.
Afterward
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, it slightly increases in the afternoon and reaches the lowest point at 4pm.
This
figure climbed sharply at 18.00 and decreased at 20.00.
Finally
, the visitors ended up approximately
at
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150 people at night.
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