The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The four pie charts depict information about

sources

of generated

electricity

in two different countries in 2009, broken down into two categories which are all types and renewables. Units are measured in

percentage

.

Overall

, it is noticeable that both countries,

Germany

and

France

, have different

proportion

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proportions

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of

sources

for generating

electricity

.

Moreover

, it is

also

interesting to note that

Germany

is more likely to use traditional thermal as the biggest source that

come

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from all types,

while

France

tends to choose hydroelectric coming from renewable energy as the main source. In

Germany

, conventional thermal which accounted for more than half at 59.6% had the highest

percentage

for generating

electricity

,

while

the amount of

electricity

from

this

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these

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sources

had the lowest point at just 10.3% in

France

.

In contrast

, nuclear

sources

had less than a quarter (23%) in

Germany

,

whereas

in

France

most

electricity

generation was nuclear with

the

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a

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percentage

more

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of more

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than three quarters (76%).

Furthermore

, in terms of renewable

sources

in

Germany

, biomass and wind power nearly have the same

percentage

with more

that

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than

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a third. In comparison with

Germany

, these

sources

only have a low proportion at just 8.1% and 10.5% respectively in

France

, and the highest value was hydroelectric

sources

at 80.5%.