The map shows the public library 20 years ago and now. Compare and summarise the information in about 150 words.
The central library plans clearly illustrate the significant changes
during
20 years.
Change preposition
over
Overall
, this
interior renovations
contains Fix the agreement mistake
renovation
replacement
Correct article usage
the replacement
Change preposition
of the
the rooms functions
Change to a genitive case
the functions of the room
the room's functions
as well as
some constructural
remodels and newly Correct your spelling
structural
nonstructural
use
places.
First and foremost, entering the building, the tables and chairs have already Wrong verb form
used
removed
and Add a missing verb
been removed
moreover
nothing has replaced them. On the right side of Add a comma
moreover,
entrance
area, there Add an article
the entrance
an entrance
were
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was
the
Correct article usage
a
room
for Correct article usage
the Equiry
Equiry
desk which completely has Correct your spelling
Enquiry
restructured
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been restructured
in
its shape Change preposition
apply
having
a new usage. Unnecessary verb
apply
likewise
the part in which children's books were kept has been Add a comma
likewise,
remodeled
as the lecture Change the spelling
remodelled
room
. Despit
those changes on the right side, between Correct your spelling
Despite
northern
and southern Correct article usage
the northern
room
Fix the agreement mistake
rooms
thers
is only Correct your spelling
there
the
one space where not Correct article usage
apply
olny
have been remained the same but Correct your spelling
only
also
some furnitures have added to the area.
Turning to left
, there are Add an article
the left
variouse
replanning Correct your spelling
various
such
as resizing the old IT room
and turn it to a multi-functional place. Reading
Correct article usage
The reading
room
, in addition
, has been reorganized slightly and plays the role of computer
Correct article usage
a computer
room
nowadays.Submitted by momenzade.mahna1999 on
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