The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map illustrates the look of today’s southwest area of an airport and what it will look like after next year’s development.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that many new facilities that are situated inside the terminal areas will be present in the future. Nonetheless
, fundamental areas like security, passport control, and customs will persist,
Today’s version of the airport has one gate for departure and one for arrival, whereas
there will be two gates on each side
. Taking a closer look at the departure area, there is a check-in site across the cafe just before the security and airport control. However
, the positioning changes as check-in
zone Correct article usage
the check-in
be
on the upper right corner and the cafe will be relocated Change the verb form
is
on
the left Change preposition
to
side
of the entrance while
new
bag drop site will be located across the former. Correct article usage
the new
On the other hand
, unlike present-day
arrival terminal, an ATM and a cafe will be found Correct article usage
the present-day
side
by side
on the right-wing corner just before passport control and customs. Other than that, there will also
be a new parking lot on the extended side
of the arrival terminal’s southeast corner
Lastly
, there are only 8 gates available with a narrow walkway from the departure area to gate 4 while
in the future, 10 additional terminals will be constructed and connected by the sky train instead
of a walkway.Submitted by pink panther on
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task achievement
To improve task response, ensure that all parts of the question are addressed thoroughly. Be comprehensive in reporting the main features and make more direct comparisons between the current and future state of the airport.
coherence cohesion
For a better score in coherence and cohesion, work on a more logical flow of ideas which includes an introduction, body paragraphs, and a conclusion. Connect these with appropriate linking words.
language
Incorporate a wider range of vocabulary and make sure punctuation is used accurately. This can add to the clarity and structure of the essay.
Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion