The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the current situation in an industrial

area

in Norbiton town and the desirable development to be held in the future.

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, it can be noticed that there

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going to

the

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asignifcant

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significant

a significant

changes in the

area

, where it will turn from an industrial

area

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residental

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residential

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the

maps

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a bridge will be

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constructed on the river in order to correlate between the

twon

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two

town

and the

farm land

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. There will be

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a striking

striking

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change in the infrastructure where the

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roundabout will be established adjoining

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, all the factories will be replaced with housing and social services

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ground

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, school, shops and a medical centre. The school will take place down the lane near the housing

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. Another striking change, going to be established , the first one will

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to the bridge and the second take place

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the third exit of the roundabout leading to the

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residential

area

that is

planned to be established there.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

167 words

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
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community
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