The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the current situation in an industrial

area

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in Norbiton town and the desirable development to be held in the future.

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, it can be noticed that there

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are

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going to

the

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apply

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asignifcant

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significant

a significant

changes in the

area

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, where it will turn from an industrial

area

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a residental

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residental

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residential

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the

maps

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maps,

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a bridge will be

have

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apply

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constructed on the river in order to correlate between the

twon

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two

town

and the

farm land

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farmland

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. There will be

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a striking

striking

astriking

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an astriking

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change in the infrastructure where the

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apply

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roundabout will be established adjoining

old

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the old

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one,

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Moreover

Morover

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Moreover

, all the factories will be replaced with housing and social services

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play

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ground

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playground

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, school, shops and a medical centre. The school will take place down the lane near the housing

area

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. Another striking change, going to be established , the first one will

leade

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lead

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to the bridge and the second take place

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the third exit of the roundabout leading to the

residental

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residential

area

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that is

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planned to be established there.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.

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4
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

167 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
retail services
revitalize
quality of life
vibrant
sustainable

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