You hired a car company, while. While you were driving you had a small accident. Write a letter to the company to explain it. When and where you hired it Describe how the accident happened What kind of action did you take after the accident

#car #company #accident #action

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I had a

car

accident on Jeju Island

last

weekend. Before I explain about the accident, I let you know some details about it. I rented a

car

from Samsung Enterprise which is famous and safe in Seoul two months ago because of travelling with my family to Jeje Island. When we arrived in Jeju Island, we picked the

car

near the Airport. Unfortunately, there were snow storms so it seems difficult to drive. It snowed too much so I could not see well and I hit a tree and stopped the drive. Luckily, my family and I did not get any injuries.

After

this

happened, I called "911" and the insurance company right away. After 10 minutes, they arrived and the staff helped me to move the

car

. I already told

this

situation with my insurance company and, my insurance will cover

this

accident.

However

, I am not sure that it will cover 100% so please let me know if I have to pay the recover the

car

. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Hwiju Jin.

Submitted by gnlwnww on Mon Jan 22 2024

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a clear, single idea.

coherence cohesion

Try to create a better logical flow between paragraphs by using cohesive devices such as transitional phrases.

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Include more specific information about the accident, such as the date and time it occurred.

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Provide information about the action you expect from the company in response to the incident.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

188 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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