You hired a car company, while. While you were driving you had a small accident. Write a letter to the company to explain it. When and where you hired it Describe how the accident happened What kind of action did you take after the accident

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I had a

car

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accident on Jeju Island

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weekend. Before I explain about the accident, I let you know some details about it. I rented a

car

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from Samsung Enterprise which is famous and safe in Seoul two months ago because of travelling with my family to Jeje Island. When we arrived in Jeju Island, we picked the

car

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near the Airport. Unfortunately, there were snow storms so it seems difficult to drive. It snowed too much so I could not see well and I hit a tree and stopped the drive. Luckily, my family and I did not get any injuries.

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happened, I called "911" and the insurance company right away. After 10 minutes, they arrived and the staff helped me to move the

car

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. I already told

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situation with my insurance company and, my insurance will cover

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accident.

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, I am not sure that it will cover 100% so please let me know if I have to pay the recover the

car

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. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Hwiju Jin.

gnlwnwwMon Jan 22 2024

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a clear, single idea.

coherence cohesion

Try to create a better logical flow between paragraphs by using cohesive devices such as transitional phrases.

task achievement

Include more specific information about the accident, such as the date and time it occurred.

task achievement

Provide information about the action you expect from the company in response to the incident.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

188 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

rented
agreement number
accident
incident
collision
damage
fault
insurance
liability
emergency services
report
evidence
witnesses
contact details
repair
compensation
notify
immediate action
circumstances
chronological order
weather conditions
traffic
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return
reference number

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