The pie chart below shows the native languages spoken by students at Bakersfield senior college in two separate years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart below shows the native languages spoken by students at Bakersfield senior college in two separate years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate five different types of mother tongues (Urdu, Chinese, English and
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) spoken by
students
at Bakersfield Senior College in 1980 and 1990. Data is presented in percentage (%).
Overall
, it is observed that the proportion of
students
with English as their first language declined notably from 1980 to 1990,
whereas
that of
students
speaking Urdu as the mother tongue exhibited a reverse trend. There are no significant changes for those speaking Chinese and other languages in
this
time period. The percentage of
students
speaking English as their first language reduced drastically by 15% from 70% in 1980 to 55% in 1990.
In contrast
,
students
speaking Urdu showed a notable surge of 13% in ten years. Meanwhile, Chinese-speaking
students
experienced a moderate increase of just 2% by the year 1990.
On the other hand
, the number
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those speaking other languages maintained a stable 6% during the study period.
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