Online education is becoming increasingly popular. Many university students are choosing to study online instead of face to face. Do the advantages of distance education outwiegh the disadvantages?

In
this
technology era, studies are done on
internet
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. The scope of e-learning is more as compared to
on campus
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among
students
.
However
, its disadvantage outweighs the advantages. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will shed light on both. To commence with, online learning
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an opportunity to study from home.
Students
can attend classes, submit their projects and write on their exams. They do not need to travel from one place to another.
Hence
, it is a
cost effective
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method.
Moreover
, it is better for
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education in other countries. People can get degrees all over the world without migration.
Additionally
, it
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proven beneficial in emergency situations.
For example
, in Covid-19
situations
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all schools, colleges, and universities were closed. At that time, teachers and
scholers
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scholars
met on websites.
Therefore
, the studies were all managed well.
On the contrary
, there are
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dilemmas. If they are not able to meet face to face
their
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will be less communication
skill
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between other
students
which means
their
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is less
self confidence
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.
For instance
,
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shows that most
students
have
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lack of confidence to perform in projects when they do it online rather than offline. It would impact
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their
employments
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later on.
In addition
to
this
, some youngsters will misuse the
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of distance learning. They will submit assignments after purchasing from
market
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and
some one
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someone
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else can write an exam for them.
Apart from
this
, juveniles will not be familiar with fun,
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excitement
, and celebrations
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on-campus.
To conclude
, technology has given a gift of learning on
internet
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.
Hence
, its popularity is
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day by day.
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after an analysis,
it is clear that
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then
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merits
such
as lack of public speaking and misuse of systems.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • virtual learning
  • asynchronous/synchronous sessions
  • digital literacy
  • course accessibility
  • virtual classrooms
  • e-learning platforms
  • multimedia resources
  • self-motivated learning
  • peer collaboration
  • web-based assignments
  • networking capabilities
  • academic dishonesty
  • hands-on experience
  • technical barriers
  • digital divide
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