The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make the comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The
two
maps depict interior
design of a central library Add an article
the interior
two
decades ago and how it has been transformed presently. Overall
, there have been a lot of changes encompassing the function of each room
and existing of additional equipments
.
Twenty years ago, there were Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
two
tables and sixteen chairs located in the middle of the library, and these facilities has
been removed. Another change is that to the right of the entrance, there is a cafe which was originally used as an enquiry desk. A Change the verb form
have
room
in front of cafe
, just on the left side of the entrance, Add an article
the cafe
a cafe
also
has been changed from reading
Correct article usage
a reading
room
to computer
Correct article usage
a computer
room
. Furthermore
, the function of two
other rooms have
Change the verb form
has
also
been transformed. Firstly
, children’s
book area, located Correct article usage
the children’s
to
the Change preposition
on
north-east
side, was converted to the lecture Correct your spelling
northeast
room
facing to
the information desk in the corridor. Apart from the information desk, there Change preposition
apply
are
Change the verb form
is
also
additional facility
Change the noun form
facilities
such
as self-serfice
machines and all reference Correct your spelling
self-service
book
in the corridor now. Fix the agreement mistake
books
Secondly
, a room
that used
for CDs, videos and computer games has been changed Add a missing verb
is used
as
a storytelling Change preposition
to
room
these days.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words two, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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