Some people believe that children should study all subjects at school, while others think they should only study subjects they are good at or find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that

children

should learn multiple topics at their educational institution

while

others trust that the materials should be limited to fields that intrigue them and excel at only. By studying various subjects, I agree that

children

would have a better learning opportunity. Considering pupils get exposed to

a much more extensive knowledge

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, resulting in the ability to implement their wide range of study as they become older and improve their

adabtability

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adaptability

in navigating advances.

Moreover

, by encouraging

children

to learn different issues all at once, it would drive them to build multifaceted

interest

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and in turn have a better insight

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life.

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, those

that

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who

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learn medical health in their formative years perhaps would be a quick-witted individual if they were being faced

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life

threatening

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life-threatening

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situation. Not only that, they would

also

be a helpful hand in dire circumstances by offering the knowledge that she has to other people around her.

On the other hand

, teaching

children

solely based on matters that they found fascinating would allow them a chance

in honing

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their skills to the fullest

while

also

giving them a

competetive

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competitive

advantage compared to their peers.

This

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turn, would push students to be confident about their ability and embrace their innate uniqueness without having to force them to learn subjects that are not aligned with their interest.

However

,

children

would have limited expertise and if their chosen subjects are not up to date with the latest trends, it would be much harder for them to adapt.

For example

, a young athlete would

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most of his time towards

practicing

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practising

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. He is able to be on top of the game but once

unfortunate

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accident

happened

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to him, it will hinder his career growth massively. In conclusion,

although

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exposure towards various fields is crucial for

children

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development, I believe that

by

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pushing

children

to get what they want would certainly help them

in understanding

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understand

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their focal point. A balanced learning process should be implemented to ensure their readiness

in facing

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to face

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countless, unthinkable, and varied circumstances.