Milk Manufacture task 1 : describing a process using information taken from diagram

The flowchart depicts all the required processes

in

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manufacturing

dairy

products

. By and large, there are two types of

products

:

milk

and cheese. As for the first main process, the whole production process

is started

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with harvesting fresh

milk

and the production of

dairy

products

.

Initially

, harvested

milk

is

are

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taken by cows grazing in the field to be processed

further

. Those cows should be sent/herded

went

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to milking machines twice a day to

milk

the cow before being saved in the refrigerator storage. Afterwards, the

milk

will be retrieved by

milk

tankers

daily

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delivery to dairies. Moving on to the next process, the

milk

is processed on huge

dairy

processing machines before being packaged. The pasteurized

milk

is packaged in jerry cans and in the box for the derivative product

such

as cheese and butter,

while

the butter is packaged in bottles. The

dairy

products

are ready to be distributed to all the markets.