The line graph gives information about the number of people in 4 distinct age groups going to the cinema once or more than once a month in Europe between 2000 and 2011.

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of people in 4 different age groups going to the

cinema

once a month or more than once a month in Europe from 2000 to 2011. The data are measured by percentages.

Overall

, it can be seen that all ages were increasing in regards to going to the

cinema

over the given period. The teenager more frequently went to the

cinema

compared to any other age

groups

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.

Whereas

the younger

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aged 7-14, the

adult

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aged 25-35 and 35 above are under

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teenager. In regards the

teenager

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, from 2000 to 2008 the audience who went to the

cinema

were fluctuated

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.

subsquently

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Subsequently

, reached its peak in 2010 with around 53% of people and fell slightly until the final

year

with approximately 50%. The same trend

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also

happened to the younger in which fluctuated from the first

year

until 2005,

then

had a gradual

rose

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and reached its highest in 2010 with around 32%. After which ended in about 28% in the final

year

. In terms of people

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aged 25-35, it fluctuated until the final

year

with around 28%.

In contrast

, the older generation had a moderate increase and stopped at around 9% in 2011.