The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given graph illustrates the median monthly alteration of the costs of three metals, including copper, nickel and zinc, in 2014.
Overall
, it can be seen that Linking Words
while
the changes Linking Words
of
copper's and zinc's prices were relatively stable, the figure for nickel witnessed more dramatic switches throughout the year.
From January to June the cost of copper gradually decreased by approximately 3%; Change preposition
in
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however
in July Add a comma
however,
they
grew by more than 1% and remained at Correct pronoun usage
it
the
constant level for the remainder of the period. Correct article usage
a
Although
the price of zinc surged by 2% in February, from Linking Words
then
onward it significantly declined by roughly 4% until June. After that it stayed relatively stable; Linking Words
however
soared during the Linking Words
last
three months by approximately 3%, exceeding the changes Linking Words
of
costs of remaining metals.
The alterations of nickel's costs witnessed a wilder pattern. They plummeted by almost 9% from January until JuneChange preposition
in
,
and Remove the comma
apply
then
rose by 2% in July. Linking Words
Then
, it stabilised for 3 months, followed by a slight drop in October, and sharply surged by roughly 3% in November. Linking Words
Finally
, it maintained at Linking Words
the
constant level until the end of the year.Correct article usage
a
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