Some people say that advetising is extremely succesful at persuding us to buy things. other people think that advertising is so common that we nolonger pay attenion to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In every country, some
people
say that adverting
is very effective at influencing Correct your spelling
advertising
consumers
buying Change noun form
consumers'
decision
,Fix the agreement mistake
decisions
whileothers
claim Correct your spelling
while others
that is
so common that we no longer pay attention to it. The interent
has made advertising more common than Correct your spelling
Internet
even
before.I think it is a powerful source of influence.
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ever
To begin
, many companies engage in advertising to gain attention from consumers; therfore
,most of them Correct your spelling
therefore
uses
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use
same
ideas and templates.Correct article usage
the same
As a result
, the consumer
are bored with the common display and they are not interested Fix the agreement mistake
consumers
with
the Change preposition
in
product
. For example
, people
are likely to skip some Correct your spelling
skin-care
skin- care
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skin-care
product
ads on Youtube
because every brand uses Correct your spelling
YouTube
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the same
same
artist and Correct article usage
the same
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the colour
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the colour
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colours
colour
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colours
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on
in
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on
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the display
display
are Correct article usage
the display
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the same
same
.
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the same
On the other hand
, in the modern world, advertisements can be found everywhere. This
is because technology has developed a lot and it is easy for producers to promote the product
.For example
, on every website , there are atleast
3 -4 ads which may broadcast.Not only on websites, in the Correct your spelling
at least
Interent
videos and on television too.On Correct your spelling
Internet
the
television, the Correct article usage
apply
advertisment
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advertisement
advertisements
are
so frequent that Change the verb form
is
people
can't watch what they want to watch it. People
feel so tired of this
situtation
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situation
then
they don't brther
to look at Correct your spelling
bother
product
.
In conclusion, advertising is now made common. It has both Add an article
the product
prons
and cons. It Correct your spelling
pros
hepls
to gain more profit and for promotion too. Correct your spelling
helps
Disadvantage
is that Add an article
The disadvantage
A disadvantage
people
are bored to watch
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watching
advertisement
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advertisements
regular
as it Change the word
regularly
distract
them from work.Change the verb form
distracts
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task response
Ensure clarity in your introduction by stating both views clearly and concisely before presenting your own opinion.
task response
Expand your own opinion with more detail and reasoning to demonstrate a complete understanding of the topic.
coherence cohesion
Work on essay structure to improve the logical flow. Include clear topic sentences at the beginning of paragraphs and make sure each paragraph focuses on a single idea.
coherence cohesion
Use a range of conjunctions and cohesive devices to better link ideas and paragraphs.
task response
Provide more detailed examples to support your arguments. Ensure that they are specific and relevant to the points being made.
coherence cohesion
Pay attention to spelling, grammar, and punctuation, as there are several typos and errors throughout (e.g., 'adverting' should be 'advertising', 'Interent' should be 'Internet', 'prons' should be 'pros', etc.).
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.