The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration below portrays the plastic bottle recycling process.
Overall
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, it is really apparent that
this
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circular process consisted of two main stages. Beginning with collection and sorting, followed by processing and washing, and
then
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regeneration into a raw material to produce and create products for consumers.
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, recycling begins when an individual throws their rubbish in a recycling bin, prior to being ferried into specialized garbage lorries.
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, those bottles are transported to the recycling
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, and the plastic bottles are sorted by hand, compressed tightly to form blocks and
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crushed into small pieces and washed through the water. The second stage involves transformation into reusable materials. The pieces of plastic are moved into a machine that
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them into pallets.
Afterward
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, these pallets are heated in order to create a raw material that can be used in the manufacture of products like clothes, bottles, containers, and pencils. Eventually, these items are produced and sold for all people worldwide and
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,
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they continue in circles like that.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Recycling process
  • Disposal
  • Collection
  • Sorting
  • Cleaning
  • Contaminants
  • Recycling center
  • Plastic flakes
  • Melting
  • Re-shaping
  • Raw materials
  • Transformation
  • Repurposing
  • End products
  • Variety
  • Sustainability
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